Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate schools .Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both views and give your opinion .
In today's world, Parents become obsessed about the type of school their children will be admitted to. At the centre of controversy is whether the education should be a separate gender based or not. In this essay I will elaborate both sides of views before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
On one hand, It is undeniable that educating boys and girls in the same school is far more beneficial because the interaction between them creates a healthy relationship which naturally tends to make them comfortable in later stages of life.This is not all, This education system increase the overall performance of the students .Since, Both genders have different abilities to learn an array of subjects they can help each other. Thus, It is clear why many people support the idea of
co-education.
On the other hand, Many consider the practice of educating girls and boys separately is best due to cultural reasons that prohibit any interconnection between males and females for the most part. For instance, In some rural areas in Egypt, It is banned to even set up mixed schools.In addition, In this system pupils tend to be focused on studies rather than being distracted to all fantasies of teenage. Obviously,Many studies showed that when boys and girls are separated, It would make them more disciplined .This explains why some caregivers prefer this kind of education.
To sum up, Both sides of the discussion have in dispute virtues and benefits.However, I agree that mixed schools is far better than unisexual schools.
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate schools.others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Disscus both these views and give your opinion 61
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate schools .Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both views and give your opinion . 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19105691057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92492315981 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662601626016 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.027774069 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.888888889 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23521810157 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829850017686 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529060473905 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134354355602 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445037526633 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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