Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate schools.others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Disscus both these views and give your opinion
In today's world,parents come to be obsessed by the type of school their children will be admitted to .At the centre of controversy is whether the single-gender or double-gender schools are more suitable to the child .In my opinion ,I strongly advocate mixed schools ,however,I will elaborate the both points of views in this essay.
First of all,mixed schools come in handy more than the separate ones because they deter gaps between men and women in the future ,as while girls and boys play together ,communication skills for both will be enhanced, and as a result,this will leads to better relationships later on .what is more,the interconnection between both kinds of sex will increase their self-esteem .so,they can be more productive and well-communicators down the road .Although these reasons for entering our children mixed schools are widely accepted ,Others have another perspective.
On the other hand ,some caregivers prefer the idea of separate schools due to cultural sources that prohibit any female to have any interaction with males especially in the first school years .for instance,in some rural areas in Egypt ,it is banned to even set up mixed school .In addition ,It is plain to notice that presence of opposite sex may distract one's mind .such as ,they may focus on embracing each other instead of focusing on the challenging subjects .Admittedly,separate schools keep pupils on track .
To sum up ,In the light of what I have explained it is clear to recognize that it is a serious decision of whether entering children in to mixed or separate schools .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10384615385 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0322475785 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.447075716 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 331.75 106.682146367 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.5 7.06120827912 559% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115240245941 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656014579587 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449907618596 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656014579587 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449907618596 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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