Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.

What should we do in our leisure time? This question confuses people to answer, as there is no definite answer. Some say that spare time is a good chance to relax, while others show that we can do valuable things in it. In the following paragraphs, I will shed a light on this argument.
On one hand, many people think that it is better for your brain to relax on rocking chair, take a power nap or spend time alone on the beach for meditation. This gives the chance for the brain to be released from the hassle of the work, get refreshed and to remain healthy. It is important to remember that you are not a machine, so respite is mandatory sometimes, as 24 hours use of the mind can cause stress and many types of health maladies.
On the other hand, due to cutthroat competition in this modern era, some people put forward the idea that using the spare time in leisure activities to improve their mind is necessary. Another noticeable justification is that leisure pursuits such as reading book or novel, writing a diary, playing scrabble, doing some exercises and solving puzzles will help you to enrich your horizon and knowledge as well as cultivate the critical thinking. Improving your mind by these activities will enhance your personality and skills; this can contribute to job achievement or get a promotion.
As spare time is precious, so I think achieving the balance between relaxation and recreational activities is necessary, this depends on the nature of the work you do. If it is mental work as studying, working as a computer operator, it is better to spend your spare time in relaxation or doing exercises. But if your work is physical, so it is a good chance to play mind games.
To recapitulate, how to use your leisure time depends on your personality and type of your job. Achieving balance and putting a plan for your free time is the perfect solution. As the time is precious, we should use it effectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6472303207 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66085102512 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513119533528 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5254021989 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337597407712 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107578418787 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702155238414 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182243300759 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528955519031 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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