Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The majority of people hold the opinion that we should spend our spare time on developing the mind with some helpful activities such as reading and brain improvement games, while other people disagree with it. From my perspective, I strongly believe with this view for many reasons.
On the one hand, leisure time is precious for many people to broaden their knowledge and improve brain development. First and foremost, we can take advantages of evenings and weekends to expand our horizons in many aspects of lives. Since our knowledge is tiny sand in the ocean, updating information from multiple sources can equip us the necessary skills and basic acknowledgement. In addition to this, it is not only work but also other factors which play a vital role in our success. Playing games such as puzzle is useful for the brain, which can stimulate it and help it more sensitive in problem solving.
On the other hand, there are many people think that off-from-work period should be spent on recovery from fatigue and tiredness. If some people have a heavy financial pressure on their shoulders, they are totally busy with their jobs and family affairs. As a result, they have a little time for themselves, therefore, spare time is really important to help them escape from bustle and hustle lives. Moreover, it also depends on the health situation of each person. Some individuals are not enough healthy to work for a long time, they need relax to recharge more energy. For instance, some people who have chronic headaches avoid some tasks that require a lot of effort to accomplish.
In conclusion, I totally agree that what we do in spare time can decide our lives in the future, however, there are many factors that affect our choices and activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amily affairs. As a result, they have a little time for themselves, therefore, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92281879195 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56060498642 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4037931785 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23908388092 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747440700073 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069536837176 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134527544303 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062299927519 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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