Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Nowadays,all people are very busy in there life they does not have time to learn new activities. So,that's why some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities but other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during free time.I am discuss here both the views.
Firstly,when some people are free then they are doing so many things in there life such as reading books and doing word puzzles,and it is very good thing when they do that things then they feel very relaxed ,and also they feel very happy because when they reading books then they learn some motivational things it is very beneficial for us because they face any type of problem very easily. As far as when people doing word puzzles it is important for their entertainment,and also for their education.Furthermore,it is just a part of their life it is not a compalsory for all people.
On the other hand,other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time because some people doing their work very long-term after that they feel very tired,So that's why some people think we take some rest in free time.Moreover when people take rest after their hardwork then they feel very snug.So that's why some human beings prefer to take rest after their work.
Altogether, both views are right because some people like to do some activities in their leisure time ,and other people feel relaxed when they take rest. It is depend on people which are doing that things in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71374045802 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55930474742 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416030534351 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.987414306 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.428571429 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4285714286 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432562091761 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244037175676 0.084324248473 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163363221914 0.0667982634062 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32885359256 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122118148518 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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