Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people prefer participating in team sports, others consider playing solo sports to be more advantageous. In my opinion, it depends on each person to find themselves a suitable sport and that both types of sports are gainful in equal measure.
On the one hand, playing in a team provides people with an opportunity to acquire many skills other than professional tactics only. They learn not only to perform their role well as an individual but also to support others as a part of the team. The cooperation builds a strong sense of solidarity, which is not easily attainable due to unavoidable conflicts and competition. Overcoming these challenges compels patience, emotional control and teamwork skills.
On the other hand, individual sports also have their undeniable strengths. In regard to one's progress, playing solo sports guarantees better training applied for each person. They can learn and practice at their own pace, therefore will not be hindered by weaknesses of a team. As a result, they can concentrate on solidifying their profession, making it much faster to excel at a sport.
In my opinion, whether team or individual sport is better depends on each person's interests and goals. It is important that people enjoy what they are doing, no matter which sport, in a team or alone. Besides, if their goal is to play well in a team, then they should definitely go for a team sport. If competing in a tennis tournament is their goal, then playing alone is surely a proper choice.
In conclusion, playing in a team may be favourable to some people, while others will benefit from choosing an individual sport. People should consider their goals and interests as factors in deciding which type of sports suits them better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...heir undeniable strengths. In regard to ones progress, playing solo sports guarantee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01712328767 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74886105485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.6722777013 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30340074458 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105920950198 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645033951167 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189424106784 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578258055313 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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