Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Playing sports, be it in team sports like cricket or individual games like tennis, is always useful for the health of one's body and mind. Sports inculcates discipline which is necessary for success in today's world.
Team games enable the players to work in groups and develop important skills such as teamwork and communication. For instance, in industries today the employees who have participated in team event sports in their past are more efficient and successful in working in teams in a professional work environment. Such individuals can adapt to and work in different team settings easily and perform better.
On the other side of the coin are single player games which depend solely on the individual, these sports help the players gain abilities like decision making, pressure handling, and self-confidence. To illustrate, I am playing table tennis (an individual game) for the past thirteen years and it has assisted me in learning some important life lessons including taking key career decisions on my own. Individual sports help players to learn self-dependence and makes us more firm in our decision making process. Managing pressure is an important aspect which people participating in these types of games learn.
All in all, sports as a whole is of great help for anyone who plans to develop their overall skills such as communication and social interactions instead of just professional skills like programming or surgery and I personally feel playing team sports help those who tend to work in a social environment and in teams whereas, for individuals in key decision making positions and in businesses single player sports would prove to be more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92441686362 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.719091782 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.1 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233413753572 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950276067853 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403966126838 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145685324094 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368309761527 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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