While some say that participating in team sports is advantageous, the remaining detractors believe the opposite that activities 1.which are more independent such as swimming is 2.provide us more benefits. Despite the theoretical benefits of two proposals, in my opinion, I favor playing team-work sports over the individual ones.
On one hand, playing sports individually can 5.provide various benefits .It helps build your self-confidence, allowing participants to make sense of themselves, focuses completely on the advantages 3.they gain through building this ability day by day to become a more good model compare to the day before. Chess, for instance, is a means of sports that garner attention 6.across continents. It requires high levels of intelligence, creativity and mentalwell-being. 7.Regular practice and put your faith on yourself are one of the key for success in such sports.
On the other hand, I would rather cooperative sports than the independent one because of some reasons. One 8.key difference is the emphasis on teamwork. While individual sports require independence, team sports require people to work together towards a common goal. Moreover, every member has the right to contribute 9.to the team strategy before the match, thereby take more chances of winning. Additionally, having a captain in our team can motivate other members 10.to give their best, utilize their strengths, completing with enhances their opportunity of achieving success.
In conclusion, both of two types of sport are all beneficial for the participant in different aspects. However, 11.from my perspective, I prefer the team-work due to their mulitifaceted benefits
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy 73
- Task 2 Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in the world live rather than written documents To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014 78
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive 61
- The use of social media e g Facebook and Twitter is replacing face to face contact for many people in thier everyday life Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62204724409 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1539340346 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653543307087 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1449907705 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247845236449 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772228693996 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601688525922 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1434933989 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059897860928 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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