Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the role of participating in both individual sports and team sports. In my opinion, each kind of sport has its own advantages and people should combine them with the aim of being more perfect.
On the one hand, it can be argued that embarking on sports in team is beneficial for young generation to some extent. The first one could be that teenagers are more likely to provide the companionship for others, leading to a fact that they would have a better sense of understanding, sympathy and empathy for each other. Those who have always been absent from the training days, for example, would touch team members’ feeling because of their family background. As a result, team members are more inclined to forgive these absent days. Moreover, youngsters could boost their team work skills through some kinds of sports which require playing in team. Consequently, students have a tendency to take advantages of these team work skills to apply for class, resulting in the high score in the exam.
On the other hand, some people argue that there are certain benefits of personal sports for young students. Firstly, an increasing number of teenagers are more likely to be more mature when having many chances to play individual sports. For example, those who are familiar with practicing alone would reduce reliance on others, improving their independent skill and being more mature. Additionally, young generation’s autonomy would enhance dramatically through personal sports. This results in making the grade at school because young students understand what they need and learn by their own ways
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be in the need of playing both individual and team sports because people can not mostly reject its own benefits impacting on them. It is necessary for people to combine them and make use of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66257056205 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2643797109 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204539975424 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782871128739 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542791519955 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145454098946 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437259831877 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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