Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether team sports, such as football or basketball are more advantageous to participate in sports or personal sports like tennis or swimming are better. There are some people believe that team sports are positive to fit well into society. The opponents, on the other hand, argue that people can enjoy their individual time to develop themselves regardless of others. This essay will illustrate both viewpoints surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with the advantages of team sports, one of the most conspicuous merits is perhaps that it could support people to cultivate sociality. This is because all team members should be united together. To illustrate, young children at the schools have sports time and they often play soccer while they acquire the method that how to fit well into society. Another advantage often made by proponents of this position is that people who have the same interesting leisure could enjoy sports more than those who work out alone. In other words, they could share information about sports and be competed in a healthy way. For example, people who just started to learn baseball could learn the rules and the way to respect other team members from their team members.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe that individual sports are more beneficial to take part in sports. These people present several arguments, but the most convincing argument is perhaps that people sho work out alone could develop patience. This is evidenced by the fact that they have to overcome with their mental powers in the battle against themselves. For example, marathon runners run alone for long periods of time and train themselves to keep their paces. As well as this, the proponents of this position believe that people should enjoy their own leisure without other forces. This is because the team play could be forced to some people who have a different lifestyle. For instance, some people prefer to work out at night time while others may want it in the early morning.
To sum up, there are two contradicting viewpoints in relation to the types of sports which are team play sports and single play sports. To choose which side I am on, I believe that both have benefits and ill effects and the important thing is one's satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9648241206 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44097514067 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.278394273 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250859727631 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083884195341 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865999691954 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158032140479 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494496565075 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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