Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others
believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion ?
A certain portion of the population believes that studying in a group is more beneficial in comparison with that in individual. While I have to admit that group study obtains some
outstanding merits, I would argue that self-study is better.
There is no denying the fact that group study helps learners attain a wide range of knowledge and skills. To begin with, an enormous number of ideas and information, which come from different people, will be gathered by learners as their partners share freely with each other. Each individual has considerable expertise in a particular aspect, so for learners, to have a fully deep view requires the contribution of many people. For instance, in most universities, capstone project, which is a final assignment to access the students’ study result, is often tackled by a group. The reason is that it provides each person a golden opportunity to realize what they lack and to learn more from team members.
In contrast, self-study offers more flexibility because students can easily choose time and places to study. having time alone will enable them to concentrate more on their business without being disturbed by any surrounded distraction, which is extremely necessary in case we have to memorize information such as when we read book or prepare for the examination. Furthermore, alone study allows students to manage their speed. it can be faster or slower depends on their ability and degree of acquisition. that is a challenge in group study because we must follow remained members.
To sum up, no matter how beneficial learning in group is, it seems to me that self-taught is often a preferable method for a big percentage of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in comparison with that in individual. While I have to admit that group study obtain...
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...and to learn more from team members. In contrast, self-study offers more flex...
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...use we must follow remained members. To sum up, no matter how beneficial le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16845878136 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90010895126 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9628801243 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273090074553 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958874690267 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659337830938 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149425105239 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539512811682 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.