Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others
believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion ?
Some people believe that students can study more effectively if they study in a group, while the opponents of this idea think that it is better for them to study alone. While there are benefits for students who prefer to study by themselves, I would argue that studying with friends offer more advantages.
On the one hand, studying alone is a good way for students to improve their focus. When students study on their own, they can completely focus on the material they choose, and spend less time on material they have already mastered, which is sometimes impossible if they study in a group because the level of each student is different. Moreover, self-study allows students to concentrate and minimize the disruptions that can keep them from retaining the material. For example, when studying alone, I can focus 100% on studying, which I can not do if I have friends besides me.
On the other hand, I agree with those who argue that studying in a group is better. Firstly, sharing knowledge which is learnt at classrooms is an excellent way to learn in a better way. Some point that students can remember the lessons better if they share knowledge with friends. For example, I was asked to join a group to study for the final exam last semester, and it is the first time I had prepared an exam with friends and with time it turned out to the best preparation I have ever had for an exam. I understood all the points that the professors mentioned at class, and we discussed other points which had not been made distinct. Secondly, some students are good at Maths while others good at Chemistry. A group provides students a way to help each other with their varying weaknesses. Best student in my class was very smart and often did well at every subject while I did poorly at Chemistry, so I asked him to join our group to help us study. This experience taught me that group-study is the most effective method for students.
In conclusion, despite the benefits that self-study can bring students, it seems to me that studying in a group, which not only help students share knowledge but also overcome their weak points is the most valuable way to learn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time I had prepared an exam with friends and with time it turned out to the best ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...ch other with their varying weaknesses. Best student in my class was very smart and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66492146597 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50631722891 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479057591623 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.095342944 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386015000523 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147854174181 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127857553243 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276751458702 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159344302752 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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