In civil society, education has been the top priority among citizens, in which choosing the most effective ways to approach the knowledge from curriculum has become a matter of debate. As far as I am concerned, studying with peers should be encouraged, while I also attach significance to self-study.
Regarding the former method, the most obvious benefit it offers is the opportunity for students to share their personal ideas in frequent discussions. Therefore, they can gain more new knowledge based on their counterparts’ own backgrounds. In addition, through group studying, participants can improve their cooperation ability, as well as the capacity of assessing and impairing knowledge to the others, which are one of the most crucial skills in contemporary life. Another aftermath is that in a particular discussion, the workload is reasonably divided with regard to individual’s expertise, so that they can both practice their own strengths and save a large amount of time.
It is also evident that the latter one has its own advantages. First of all, this mean can better their independence, including self-estimation and self-development. Thus, students are likely to address a variety of problems by their own. On the top of that, it creates no disturbance among classmates and helps them to be more focus on their study as sometimes a discussion may lead to some unnecessary arguments unfortunately. Furthermore, studying by their own can be beneficial in some circumstances. To cite an example, during COVID pandemic, social distancing is essential. Studying alone means they both follow the safety regulation and ensure their task achievement.
I pen down saying that although both group discussions and study alone are effective, the latter is the more potential approach.
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone Discuss both views and give your opinions 89
- Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can get so much information through the Internet and study just as well at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atter is the more potential approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40569395018 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23212791799 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0738346323 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199720318826 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656350103275 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630750989776 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128889587004 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661512376857 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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