Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone Discuss both views and give your opinions

People have different views on which one is better: studying in groups or studying alone. While some people believe that studying alone is better, I would rather choose to study in groups.
There are some reasons why people think that students should study alone. Firstly, studying alone helps them boost their concentration. For example, if they work in groups, they tend to make small talk rather than focus on studying. This leads to time-consuming and they might lose their concentration. Secondly, self-studying also gives students the freedom to enjoy their own pace. When they work individually, they can plan their best effective timetable and they also can focus exactly on what they have to learn without any dependence on other teammates.
However, it seems to me that I think studying in groups has some benefits we must not deny. First of all, studying together helps students have more interest in studying. Sometimes, while they are alone, they could not find any reasons to continue studying. Therefore, they would get distracted easily. If they have teammates, they are likely to study together to find an interesting way to learn. Not only that but also studying in groups helps students to understand the topics better. Students might make mistakes or misunderstand some points and without teammates, they could not find a way to correct them no matter how they work hard. Such as they are bad at Maths, so they need a friend who is good at Maths to help them.
In conclusion, besides some benefits self-studying brings to students, I suppose that studying with others might have better consequences.

Votes
Average: 8.2 (4 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05597014925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6574997797 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7710233369 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7058823529 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317473986804 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125838635894 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103122791304 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234941880167 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978577452174 0.056905535591 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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