Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With planting more trees in urban areas is essential for living atmosphere while, Others argue that shelter is basic requirement for life that is by having housing in the city. However, I agree that the drawbacks of having more houses will outweigh the benefits which will be investigated below.
For creating pollution free environment growing trees is the prominent factor for cities. As it benefits the physical health to promote. Probably, trees produce enough oxygen to counteract the dangerous pollution in the area. To exemplify, heat can be controlled as trees filter the sun heat and offer the shade. Thus, it ultimately lows the temperature of particular areas.
With the introduction of green areas in urban cities peaceful environment can be found. Then, noise created by traffic collapse might be reduced. Survey was conducted to have strong mental abilities and high cognitive skills of people living in such areas. Peaceful areas are more likely to be developed raising the country growth. Hence, open areas should be renovated with majority of trees to have healthy living style in towns.
Despite having view on this notion, city space should also be used for housing purpose. First, lack of living areas can lead to severe crimes and conflicts between local people. City will not only be able to grow and develop but also migrants like workers would find difficult in accessing to house. As a result, people will become homeless and can lead to have alcoholics and drugs. Finally, slums will develop.
To conclude, although every area should have trees and parks, having housing facilities is that much crucial for people to survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45484878941 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7892635243 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184713308738 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549545184774 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519185014256 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110493362684 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571207710475 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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