some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Trees play a crucial role in everyone's life, there is a trend that people plant more and more trees in open urban areas. While I agree that this pattern has many benefits to the environment, I believe that it is more important to build houses in those areas.
On the one hand, the benefits of growing more green space in towns are indisputable. It is obvious that trees purify air, which significantly reduces dust generated by transportations and construction sites. Besides that, it also reduces noise pollution through leaves by sound distributing. Hence, generally, the living environment in urban areas will be greatly improved.
On the other hand, the lack of shelter will have many drawbacks. Firstly, in urban areas, it will greatly raise the rental price because of the continuous increase in housing demand, which creates highly financial pressure to most of the people who are living there. For example, more people can not afford an apartment, more social problems will appear, such as raising homeless and crime rate. Secondly, building houses in rural areas also has some negative effects on the economy. It is obvious that commuters will have to transport further and longer to work in city centres, which not only reduces their productivity but also wastes more expense for transport purposes.
In conclusion, planting trees in urban areas to protect the environment is very important. From my point of view, I believe it is more considerable to continue to construct houses in those areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11290322581 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6962995415 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2098048039 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314355209639 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10476193211 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878785434956 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200722412821 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927860655697 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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