Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other country , while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because all information can be seen on T.V and the internet . Discuss both views and give your own opinion .
Nowadays , Certain individuals believe that it is important to travel abroad to learn about other nation , but some people think that all information can be seen on T.V and Internet so it is not imperative to travel abroad . As far as my point of view , internet and T.V are best way to learn about other country, which I would like discuss further.
They are several reason behind this why internet an t.v are helpful to learn about other nations. The first and foremost reason is that nowadays all information can be seen in the t.v and Internet. Everyone use internet and T.v in their daily routine . This method of information does not require many financial resources . People easily get information about other nation.At the same time second reason is that all information about other country can be seen on internet like information related to culture , traditions and food of other nations . People easily learn about other countries with the help of other people and without going any where . People also save their time.
Nevertheless , a majority of people believe that it is important to travel abroad to learn about other nations. There are several reason behind this view. First of all , when people visit any country. They meet different types of people. They learn so many things releated to other nations. People also know about behaviour people who lived in other nation . At the same time second reason is that when people visit any country they can learn about the lifestyle of other people .
In conclusion, I would like pen down internet and T.V are good way to learn about other nations.
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- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other country , while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because all information can be seen on T.V and the internet . Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90808823529 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40576408466 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0719384696 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5294117647 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470824335107 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160045391513 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12576453363 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314274540641 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127465857555 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.