Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is, of course, important to obtain knowledge about other nations. Some people of particular interest mostly travel overseas to educate themselves, however, others believe that a better understanding can be gained even via information available online and on television. This essay will include the relevant views and my opinion about both the statements.
Undoubtedly, time spent in abroad can surely provide quite credible and authentic cultural experience. It is seen that those who fly to other countries are more confident about their expertise. Because they have visualised every possible moment. I believe that the true nature of a place can only be deeply felt and understood when an individual physically lives it. For instance, a majority of the journalists consider spending time in a native country about which he wishes to write about, so the ideas pertinent to the subject flow in their mind naturally. Therefore, there is no harm in having a tour away from home to grasp the crucial details.
On the other hand, abundant amount of resources is readily accessible on the internet to all the age groups are cost effective. It is true that websites available to the users barely involve any money relatively. Moreover, shows, news and movies for the displayed for the purpose of entertainment do bring the actual sense of a particular place to build connection. Nonetheless, I think that though it is cost efficient and loaded with information, it is still not very reliable. Especially, for the one who has a keen desire to learn more about a particular area.
In a nutshell, most of the human beings choose to rely upon the sources they have in their vicinity due to affordability and financial crunches. I reckon that every mankind who strongly relishes non-native tradition and customs would never deny international travel unless they have some personal issue or probably too lethargic to go on a trip.
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...e more confident about their expertise. Because they have visualised every possible mom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for instance, i reckon, i think, of course, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11075949367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84255965802 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0047127341 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244365816248 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618402512886 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495049047512 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125615071597 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697774946899 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.