Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that if you want to learn new information about other countries you should visit these countries personally, while others disagree with it and think that everything what people have to do is search the internet or look for information about countries abroad from TV shows. This essay agrees that traveling broadens the mind and it is sorely needed to go abroad to lean something new about other nations. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that visiting other countries allows travelers through personal contact to lean a lot of different aspects of foreign countries such as basic language, main traditions and interesting unpopular or even undiscovered places. All of this people can not reach just through TV programs or reading blogs or posts in the internet. Such sources of information would never inspire you to study rare foreign languages, you would never feel local traditions of people abroad and nobody would show you unpopular places because of popularity rating of these TV shows and web-sites. It is therefore agreed that it is necessary to travel abroad to discover foreign countries. The main example of it is my feelings when I visited Poland in 2014 in comparison with my perception of watching Ukrainian reality show "Heads and tails" which demonstrated two people traveling the same country with different amount of money.
However, many disagree and feel that all the information about other countries, their culture and traditions along with the most popular place people can find on internet pages or through watching TV programs. Despite this, the personal contact with foreign people and their mindsets remains priority. For instance, recent research revealed that all information which were not taking personally assimilate in different level than personal one's.
In conclusion, while benefits of traveling abroad due to lean the new information about other countries are obvious, some still feel that all can be found without leaving home. However, while people are interested to discover all information personally they will regularly travel abroad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32840236686 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66469519254 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9163128259 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.538461538 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394200692317 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139180131766 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809483078605 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24752648528 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842230354524 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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