Some people think that it is nescessary to control the children event from little. What to extent to agree or disagree?
The tight controlling child always starts with the love and worry of every parent. I think that controlling children from very young is very necessary but to some extent which must be suitable for children’s growth period. This essay will explain my opinion.
The first point I would mention is that all parents should manage their children since these children were little kids. The kids always observe and try to catch first everything occurring around them without getting known that it is good or bad for them. So, parents play a vital role in following their child to help them avoid dangerous things, understand what things should be done or not as well. As a result, kids will be built the good living-characters by their parents' guide.
The next point I would argue that controlling children until they have grown up is still important but should not be too strict. The reason for that is children’s sense and thinking has changed from completely base on parents to prefer expanding relationships. If parents meddle much in children’s private life, such as pick up them, meet their friends, read their diary, or underhand check their facebook, etc., the children would be stressful. Consequently, these children have a tendency which wants to leave from their parents, become more closed, or even have the opposite attitude.
All in all, I concur that parents should control their kids to some extent. Setting up a limitation and requiring them to comply correctly. Be free in this limitation, children would get the chance to become an independent person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, still, well, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07279693487 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74911089665 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8472209873 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179350445174 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648043300111 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687334563084 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126465129541 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606049334223 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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