Some people think it is a waste of money to establish libraries since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information, do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement in technology , we have better access to everything with the help of internet. However majority of the people believe that it is of no use to invest funds in opening libraries because today everyone is certainly inclined towards technology and has access . According to me libraries hold their own importance and fast internet can never replace them. This essay will discuss fourth points.
In regard to the people , the libraries are still the most peaceful and quiet place where one can study without any disturbance. Firstly a person has all the access to the vast pool of knowledge through physical books available. For instance a lot a people prefer reading a book and not having access to it on the net. There are many of the manuscripts and books which are not even available on the internet but one can definitely access them in a local library.
Secondly there are many side effects of being on-screen all the time. A person can have severe effect on his eye sight . For instance if we are spending more than 1 hr on-screen without taking breaks it can lead to eye damage. Consequently one will have to use specs . Hence this could be prevented if we opt for using physical books sometimes.
To conclude , to invest in building libraries so that public can use is a good option as one gets break from always using the internet and it also benefits them physically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79012345679 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54928674762 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5132032312 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1428571429 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162017289239 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052967610996 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452568761824 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107880297575 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394869126004 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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