Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside urban centres.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
The presence of large companies and industries in an area are major indicators of development especially after the era of industrialisation. Although, the location of such edifices is a topic of moot as some believe it is better to have them within the province of an urban city, while others believe it would be better if they are present in a rural area. The essay aims to discuss both the perspectives.
To commence with the positives, a significant advantage of having these companies in regional areas is that it can aid in providing a wide range of job opportunities that could include both skilled and unskilled workers. Moreover, when an industry is setup in a certain area, it brings along with it a lots of development like better road, transport facilities, which eventually leads to development of the surrounding areas. Additionally, there’s an added advantage for the companies as well, as they tend to get larger space to setup in rural areas than in the urban. Also, it is best if they are isolated from the hustle and bustle of the city.
Despite the positive arguments, there seems to be a downside to it. Initially, it might be difficult for the companies to find skilled workers as most of them reside in urban cities due to which people might not be willing to travel. In order to attract the employees to work, there can be some additional cost incurred by the company in providing facilities like travel and home space.
In conclusion, although setting up an industry outside an urban has some adverse effects but on deeper dive the merits overweigh the demerits significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88321167883 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8991153361 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.177257832 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.636363636 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307607972811 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958035799569 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583465590343 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166162452438 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353000988587 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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