Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent
One of the most vital issues in contemporary socierty is whether schools should educate children how to be a responsible parent. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
One of the most vital issues in contemporary socierty is whether schools should educate children how to be a responsible parent. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, this is disadvantageous to some extent. One explanation to support this view is that studying academic subjects shoud be high on the agenda not a parental role. Furthermore, although the youth aware of being a good parent, they literally can't find their occupations or attain fianancial stability. In addtion, the youngster are not mature enough to understand the responsibilties of parents and this topic make them get bored without effort. Another justification the advocates would put forward is that there are more social skills which essential in the future need to be taught such as how to work in team or present before crowded people.
On the other hand, the option to directing students to be a skilled fathers and mothers is attractive for several reasons. First of all , more and more people nowadays are not responsible for their childre. As a result, the youngster are lack of love and education from family tend to be a burden for society. Hence, being a knowledgeable is not enough, you have to know how to behave well also. There is a significant growth in broken family that show children suffer a lot
The conclusion to be drawn is that to be a good parents, children not only study at school but also learn it from life experiences. It would be well-advised that there should be a cooperation between schools and families to make children better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91698113208 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8662424348 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7629044304 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395545864267 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126953584644 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588054220181 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239404669318 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539951854104 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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