Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
In recent decades, one of the controversial issues among people has been the best way to bring up a child. For that reason, one of the actions could be students to be taught in schools how to be a good parent. I myself do not concur with this statement based on some reasons which will be mentioned in this essay as well as the skills which every person should have to be a great one.
First of all, the main reason which has made me to not be agree with the idea of educating every student in schools how to be a good mother or father could be the fact that every person should not have a child. I definitely believe, being a considerate parent needs lots of efforts and everybody does not have all the expertise in order to raise a baby properly. The other concept could be the experiences which could only be gained when a person has been grown up. Such as the qualities which could not be learnt in learning courses. Consequently, if a person wants to have a big family in the future, they must wait until they have obtained many understandings through their life.
Additionally, those abilities which have been given to individuals during their lifespan, have had wide range of diversity. However, every child may be various from others they have had many similarity. So to be honest, a good parent not only should have lots of characteristics such as understanding or considerable ones, but also they have to be aware of the differences between periods of human’s age in order to bring them up according to it. Moreover, human-beings would obtain this knowledge to know how to raise a baby by growing up. So the main principal of being a good parent would be their consciousness and awareness to all the aspects of a child’s life.
In conclusion, not every person has had the eligibility to be an understanding partner and parent. Therefore, in my opinion, teaching every student how to be an excellent one, is an inane task. So as a result, a good parent has had many skills which were mentioned in this essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun similarity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many similarities'.
Suggestion: many similarities
...ay be various from others they have had many similarity. So to be honest, a good parent not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58516483516 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7084554436 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6867627728 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449272363904 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166853907954 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111962651889 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314953953429 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495212134341 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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