Due to the high unemployment rate, finding an ideal job is one of the problems that the vast majority of young people care about. Some people believe that job satisfaction is way more significant than job security, whereas others have the converse thought. This essay will discuss both of the statements and propose a reasoned conclusion.
There is no suspicion that the satisfaction has an excessively important role to play in seeking for a job. When a person has a sense of satisfaction, they might cooperate with other people better, which leads to a higher productivity. In contrary, if people are unpleased, they will have a risk of dropping out of the position since they have to undergo metal problems such as unhappiness or stress consistently. Moreover, job satisfaction is also a key to attract more talented people into the profession due to the tendency of having a stable but undemanding job.
On the other hand, it is also undeniable that job security is somehow more important. Employees sometimes have to bear the brunt of unpleasantness during working hours, problems with colleagues, too much work or strict employers for example. Furthermore, an enduring job is now apt to have an enormous significance. Because of the high unemployment rate, many people struggle a lot for a long-term job with a view to no longer having to pay much concern on their future career, so that they can spend more time for other activities.
In conclusion, both have their own importance. Since not everything is perfect, people can choose which is more go-to and more necessary for their job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00374531835 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95062160434 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4721839798 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482143657423 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175446913464 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123855709341 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313523602071 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436033195567 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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