It is common belief that some people living in metropolitan cities brings negative effects to people's health. However i firmly believe that these perceptions are not true. And this essay will adress the reasons for my view as follow.
Firstly,there are several benefits when living in big cites.One of the major advantages is providing many fitness centres, where city dwellers can excercise on a regular basis with modern equipments. As an instance, parks can be used not only for recreational activities but also for workout purposes. Therefore, reducing the ratio of obedience and decrease health's issues. Besides, there are also wide range of foods to fit with one's diet plan. Secondly, hospitals in cities have more professional services than those in villages.These might be extravagant because of high-quality machine that imported from abroad but can diagnose a person's illness correctly.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, with the help of psychologists and net-work access, city residents can ameliorate their sate of mind by attending to therapy 2 times a week or getting advice from the internet so an introvert person don't have to meet his therapist.Likewise, being mental unstable is no longer an issue to many people because anyone will be able to get help by a professional.In the past few decades, the proportion of depressed adolescents drop instantly as well as the percentage of suicide while those in villages rise substantially.
To encapsulate, I completely disagree with the idea of relocating to cities is bad for people's health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.324 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08412451111 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.156005654 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.1 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228638724372 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977944855008 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1234065626 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181189982514 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119060411907 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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