Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there has been increasing advocacy that settling in large urban areas brings detrimental effects to people’s health. From my perspective, despite some undeniable advantages that this activity may bring about, I strongly believe that living in major cities takes a heavy toll on individuals’ well-being.
On the one hand, it is obvious that residing in big cities brings some positive aspects for people’s mental health due to its convenient living conditions and contemporary facilities. For example, individuals can easily recharge their batteries and take a load off after stressful and hectic schedules through modern entertainment in shopping malls and amusement parks, which are hard to find in rural areas. Additionally, large cities provide more comfortable and accessible medical services for citizens.
On the other hand, the negative sides of living in big cities are far more crucial. First, the frenetic lifestyle in big cities forces individuals to work hard and even juggle multiple jobs to afford high living expenses and accommodation costs. Consequently, lacking quality time for friends and family causes many people to suffer from chronic anxiety and loneliness. Second, in this modern society, the development of industry and services in big cities causes more pollution, posing a direct threat to citizens’ physical health. For example, fine dust from vehicles and factories damages people’s lung, and industrial wastes from burning fossil fuels lead to a host of other health problems.
In conclusion, while living in big cities brings numerous advantages to our lives, I am strongly up to the opinion that it brings destructed impacts on both the mental and physical well-being of citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51492537313 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85530424086 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7916912142 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278005189267 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105255715376 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573679375813 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158251201422 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567574182696 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.