Some people think that the main benefit of greater international cooperation is in the protection of environment while others think that it is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, many countries in the world have close-knit and health relation for several reasons. Many people believe that the main benefit of greater international is in the preservation of wild habit of rare species. Others believe that its main benefit is in the world business. I agree with the second opinion and following this essay will discuss in detail.
On the one hand, at the moment, there are no denying that warm global is the biggest problem which each country have to cooperate to solve completely. One of the most important reasons is that the enormous number of natural resources is being explored and exploited by human and they are running out year by year. An Environment problem is one of the most emergency bases so all country in the world have to meet to discuss and sign an environmental agreement in every year. A lot of developed countries set up many organizations which research and protect in danger of species from the illegal hunter.
On the other hand, it is said that world business is one of the largest benefits for countries. Many companies, firms, restaurants and hotels are expanding in the world and it makes a lot of chances for people to have job. For example, Uber and grab firm help many Vietnamese people earn a salary to pay for living cost and tuition fee. They have helped Vietnam solve a large number of people who have no job since they appeared in this country.
In conclusion, international cooperation is essential for common benefit of each country. It influences positively on their economic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...companies, firms, restaurants and hotels are expanding in the world and it makes ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...kes a lot of chances for people to have job. For example, Uber and grab firm help m...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ion fee. They have helped Vietnam solve a large number of people who have no job since they appea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83082706767 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65512825152 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8541288592 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182932555074 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706263870296 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704417302278 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115849335893 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678386717587 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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