Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People’s views differ regarding whether the firms can make decisions via the workforce. While some arguments advocate the managers in decision-resolve, I believe that workers' views should be considered as important as those of senior management.
On the one hand, letting an administrator make decisions independently in firms or corporations brings a variety of benefits for some reasons. Firstly, critical decisions provided by the higher academic levels of individuals are more likely to be clearer and more decisive. For example, people trained in professional environments might have foresight in business sectors, therefore they will determine accurately potential circumstances that those who have lower-educated are not able to do. Secondly, if a company allows all workers to contribute to the procedure of making resolutions, which could take a long time to get anyone’s views, or even it might bring obstacles to senior positions when choosing a final one.
On the other hand, I would argue that contributions from the workforce might be much better than the one-sided opinions of the managers. In particular, permitting employees to have a right to come up with their standpoints is a good way for the executive board, who eventually makes a decision, to get plenty of views from many aspects of work-life. As a result, companies not only get comprehensive ideas but can also reach out to their workforce indirectly and efficiently, therefore benefiting the corporations as a whole.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that companies should scrutinize employees’ viewpoints in the decision-resolve process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50980392157 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32638260316 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1995260637 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272912717512 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103534372305 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721355960005 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176281997122 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822041431148 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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