Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, the information about crimes draws a myriad of attention from the public. While I agree that this information should be given to the community in detail, I think in some special situations the media shouldn’t do that. This essay will set out to explain why.
There are some compelling reasons why the media should show the detail information about the crimes. Firstly, residents could have a deep sight into illegal activities. Thanks to those signs so that people may protect themselves by recognizing signs of some prevalent crimes in the streets or public transports such as pickpockets and theft easier, therefore the society will be more secure in the future. Secondly, a crime report could help the public enhance more knowledge about what they have to pay when breaking the law. Through TV news or social media, they can be provided helpful information about crime identity, strictly punishment as well as a warning to citizens. It seems a good way to reduce the amount of crime in society indirectly.
However, in some cases, the media should not supply information about crime in detail because of some reason. For one, in some of the advanced circumstances, the details of the case need to keep it secret. If this information is declared to the public then some other crimes may mimic and learn the tricks of the recent case. Furthermore, the personal identity of some offenders should not show in the media leading to protect the private information of them when the investigations are inconclusive.
In conclusion, reporting details of crimes to the community seems to be a serious problem. The government should take responsibility for controlling whether information about crimes would be given to the public correctly and individuals need to conceive the criminal information wisely as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ail because of some reason. For one, in some of the advanced circumstances, the details of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85971249526 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2378332442 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343050384086 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115089807141 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768241922705 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212850472401 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384068070328 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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