Some people think the media television and films negatively affect people’s behaviour other do not think so how do you think the media affects people’s behaviour? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
Since the invention of technology the lifestyle of people has undergone drastic change owing to this it is considered by some individuals that media and televisions have adverse implications on human beings nature, however, other against the viewpoint. This essay would be articulated how masses’s behaviour can be changed by these factors in forthcoming paragraphs along with reasons and examples.
Commencing with why people have become victim of social media and how it put negative effects on them? Because of these factors seem as an entertainment so that is why public prefer to watch movies to spend their time without knowing whether it is beneficial or not for them. However, catastrophic effect cannot be overlooked such as vulgarity is shown by films owing to this people can indulge into the crime. For example of shooter Punjabi movie which released in 2017 in India. It was based on gangsters biography due to this public started to commit crime is illustrated by police department. Consequently, social media influences people’s nature like aggressiveness after watching action movies.
However, despite having demerits of television and films also many merits like enhance enlightenment . In other words, in this modern era, majority of people are being got knowledge about different cultures by watching traditional movies such as "CHAR SAHIBZADE” it represents the sikh religion and 70% students came to know about the sikh religion when it used to display in the schools. Apart from this, individuals can also get success through the motivational videos which can be watched on media and television. For instance, A Thokar movie which boost the failure to try again for achieving their goals. Therefore, TV, media and films are not only broaden the horizon but also provide entertainment and best for getting motivation.
In conclusion, although social media has negative implication on societies, yet, according to me, it is very convenient to get relaxation, knowledge and make a cordial relation while watching TV after sit with family.
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- Some people think the media television and films negatively affect people s behaviour other do not think so how do you think the media affects people s behaviour Use specific reason and examples to support your answer 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37423312883 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88901981392 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625766871166 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3865909847 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175281182204 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600350156952 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463577275219 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102954429051 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395697786416 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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