Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
It is commonly believed that some certain jobs are designed specifically for either men or women due to their abilities. While people assume this as a matter of course, I however, disagree.
On the first hand, in the old days, jobs recruiting often based on the powers whom men have, such as they are stronger, bigger then women are. In contrast, women have smaller shape with long thin fingers, so they will fit with some jobs required skillfull techniques such as sewing and tailoring. However, those qualities were the standards for men and women in the early 90s.
On the other hand, in the current day, we are living in an equally gender society, so the criterias for a job have changed dramatically since the last few years. People from both genders could now choose which jobs they want to work. There is no barrier for a jobs like they used to be, people have free will of choosing a job despite their sexes.
In conclusion, i believed there are absolute no jobs which suit only for one gender in this current day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while, as for, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6393442623 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31973488494 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633879781421 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0252428707 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352491737232 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143505024069 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795196381958 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209024118724 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850613159924 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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