Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by honza on Mon, 07/09/2018 - 09:42

Since ever people believe in fact, that men and women are not equal. As a result of this specific jobs are designated for different gender. I'm absolutely disagree with this believed fact. This essay will state my opinion and support them with examples.

Nowadays feminism is everywhere talked topic. Many developed countries, such as Australia, England or New Zealand, promote equality between different sex, gender or sexual orientation. Men and women in named countries are protected by Acts and Laws and any possible discrimination is punishable. One clear example is presence of female personnel in emergency services here in Australia. Women are assigned to same position as their male partners, however, criteria for admission are outlined for same gender same way. In comparsion, in The Czech republic, female paramedic must be accompanied by male co-worker, furthermore, woman cannot be driving Ambulance or assigned to same vehicle with same sex Paramedic.

In addition, females showed over last decades their enthusiasm, drive and potential in many fields. Their effort have been noticed by public. Hence, more female politicians are elected to highly recognised positions. To give a clear example of society recognised female in The United States of America is Michelle Obama. Michelle Obama is expected as a first woman voted by public to post of The President of USA. For instance Angela Merkle represents high-ranking political post in Germany for one decade.

To sum up, In my opinion, I believe that old believed falsity of gender disbalance is not suitable for modern society and female are matronal and equal.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34496124031 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77028766021 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.666341968 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1176470588 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153572596698 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459598575562 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565031117792 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09010570445 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385290411238 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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