Some people think that men and women have different qualities. therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some job are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Although, many people deem that male and female have diverse description and it is a convincing,but some assured work and jobs are befitting for men and women. I think in a reverse manner and disagree to the given statement.My affirmation is justified in the following paragraphs.
Out of all the controversy,the strongest one to prove my view is,in today's generation there is nothing like men and women in professional life. They all are working seemly in everything.This is to say as male and female has equal chance to work in same field also both has potential to do work or job by their capability.A good example for this is a family business,job in various companies and as a teacher. Beside this nowadays many women Run their own NGO for handicaps and orphan house and by these type of social works they give employment to other peoples.
The other reason to prove my point is now a days fellow and women has same interest in equivalent quality for jobs,because in this independent world mankind and womenkind work in the Army or any other forces, because they both are equally strong with mentally health and Physical health. In addition,the fact this is that in present days women are working in behalf of men in same position and profession.For instance as a doctor,engineer and manymore.
On the contrary, there is a one job,which women do with their full effort and without any lure. Which is nursing job ,because women have Golden heart with lot of feeling.Which is God gifted.They are also caring other people.Also this type of job men is doing,but with compare to women men is nothing in this job.
Thus, to rap up discussion, it can be said that we have to give equal stand to human's, whether it is a men or women. Society have to devote them corresponding opportunity to grow them in everythings.We have to demolish discrimination of man and woman.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83900928793 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97362901108 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8682518373 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287214046969 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111018333795 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078069031327 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162257275432 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063285614602 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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