Nowadays, this is an interesting topic to be discussed that man and women according to their qualities fit at different positions at work.
I somehow agree to this statement that their are some certain jobs that are suitable for men not for women and vice-versa.
In accordance with this statement I would say like for example in Traditional time, men used to work to feed his family and provide all basic needs to his family. He is like a breadfidder to his family. He used to work day and night in order to fulfill all the necessities of his family. Men is the only person who works to earn some money whereas women were homemakers to take care of the house and family.
But, like if we compare old time with the current time it is not possible for the men to work alone in this high budget market. As time passes, needs of the people and standard of living also increases, so as to meet these raising demands along with men women also works.
They do their jobs according to their qualities that best suits them, for example if a women has good communication skills she can work as a Receptionist, or if she is good at new fashion trends, then Fashion Designing could be the best women for her.
So, in this way their are plathora of jobs that are available that women can opt for according to her qualities. Whereas if we see the side of men their are also plenty of jobs available that he can chose according to his qualities and career like Engineer, Doctor, Builder etc..
So in the last, I would say that according to someone's qualities and capabilities they can chose their jobs that best suits them.
- in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studied 56
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a woman; women
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Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
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Suggestion: choose
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...nes qualities and capabilities they can chose their jobs that best suits them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47796610169 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43323724557 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481355932203 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3258614914 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280418614784 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113795807559 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125187327026 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155888677487 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141268756485 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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