Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming more dependant on each other . While, other say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few masses believe that people are independent each other .However, Other assert that in this modern world individuals are dependant on each other. Whereas, this easy will discuss both views in following pharagraph.
To embark with, there are Manifold points to shore up my views. First and foremost, the existence of electric household devices because technology is increaseing day by day and many gadgets lunch in everyday namely computer ,washing machine and microwave so on. They do not need to take help from other person in household work . All work they can do with the help of technology . However, in earlier days due to lack of technology people had to take help from other person . Secondly, in this modern era ,children have optimum opportunity to make their career because learner choose only that field in which they are best so if they choosing field according to interest so they do not need other person because they have already related to their field . They give best their towards their work
Nevertheless, undoubtedly , there are many work in which really hard for single person so that they need to take help to compulsory their work . For example, in restaurant ,house maid and office in this field workers are needed this is because single person can not handle their whole situation they have to work with their employ to fulfil their desire . Furthermore, inflation is also chief reason behind this dependence because of some masses have do not money to fulfill basic needs they have to dependant on other person so that easily do their work without face any financially problems.
To sum up , in this era ,people are becoming more independent . Thus, dependence is better than independence because where people depend on other they get great idea towards their problems and will not face any problems.
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...independent each other .However, Other assert that in this modern world individuals a...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
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...at in this modern world individuals are dependant on each other. Whereas, this easy will ...
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...ndividuals are dependant on each other. Whereas, this easy will discuss both views in...
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...ng day by day and many gadgets lunch in everyday namely computer ,washing machine and mi...
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...elp from other person in household work . All work they can do with the help of t...
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...eople had to take help from other person . Secondly, in this modern era ,children ...
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...which they are best so if they choosing field according to interest so they do not ne...
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...they have already related to their field . They give best their towards their work...
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...ed to take help to compulsory their work . For example, in restaurant ,house maid...
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...their work . For example, in restaurant ,house maid and office in this field work...
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...field workers are needed this is because single person can not handle their whole...
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...an not handle their whole situation they have to work with their employ to fulfil...
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...with their employ to fulfil their desire . Furthermore, inflation is also chief re...
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...ey to fulfill basic needs they have to dependant on other person so that easily do their...
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...ace any financially problems. To sum up , in this era ,people are becoming more i...
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...ially problems. To sum up , in this era ,people are becoming more independent . T...
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...ra ,people are becoming more independent . Thus, dependence is better than indepen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99671052632 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48533142175 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4481074982 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199043515673 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922849328543 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11757474075 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188384987715 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148779104579 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.