Some people think that university students should specialize in one subject . While others think universities should encourage students to learn a range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few individuals assert that universities should implement many subjects in their study. However, other think only one subject impose in study . Before farming any firm opinion both sides will be discussed in upcoming pharagraph.
To embark with, there are manifold points to shore up my views. First and foremost, the availability of many subjects in universities are worthwhile because with the help of these subjects learner can broaden their horizon about subjects. For example, when children learn many subjects in universities they can increase their knowledge also get job due to such subjects. Secondly, the presence of different subject is very benefical for children because when learner want to migrate from one country to another country than they will not face any problems related to communication with other person . Because they have already knowledge about that language with the help of language they can create harmony also do a part time job .
Nevertheless, if universities teach one subject in classes it is beneficial because learner can get information deeply and they can apply for job related to that subject if they will get job related to their subjects company manager give them high salary due to stunning information related to work . Moreover, single subject also save money because if student learn one subject they no need to take tuition other subject for gain knowledge. So they can save money by learning one subject. Furthermore, one subject also contribute to leave fit and fine because when they learn single subject they do not want to learn other subject. So they spend their free time to physical exercises and improve their health.
To sum up, both views have their own value. Therefore , in my point of view, many subjects should be taught in universities because with the help of they can get different type of knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13486842105 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61293544421 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509868421053 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2337746736 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231506804322 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938303271826 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592081908424 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16910864014 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593269613074 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.