Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other, while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals believe that people who live in the modern city or society have the behavior depend on the other made up much more, but another argue that living in the modern place are more independent, due to the environment in social development. From personal view,
On the one hand, there is a major reason that is some people believe those who live in modern area depend much more on each other such parents, teacher and friends. In the past, every citizen who lived in the period lacked technological machine to help them. Then they must go to work without depending on someone else, due to several works to do respectively, and it makes people extremely tired. As a result, they are unable to help another person, and nowadays many machines can be replaced by humans to do daily work.
On the other hand, other individuals believe that living in the environment usually growth by day and makes them more independent while lazy. In the modern world, various devices and machines replace humans to do some work can be replaced, then the environment of it becomes competitive with others. In the competitive society where the most individuals must take part in the race to get the status of their own, which means they do not have parents assist anymore. As a result, they will be eliminated if they do not have any job.
In conclusion, some individuals believe the person who lives in improvement social will be became lazy and depend on each other and technology, while others think that living in the modern environment people more independent. This topic has two sides to discusses, because live in the modern era when a lot of technology is growing, so depending on it too much can be happened and make them boring go to work or have a job. However, in that environment serves competition, they will be eliminated in that society if people do not participate in the race. As a result, humans can depend a bit on technology to help them reduce some housework, but they must be independent in their lives to receive a lot of well-fare of social in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... social development. From personal view, On the one hand, there is a major reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7032967033 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6258160703 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.309792347 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286146665108 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111841806141 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119808470918 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205128042875 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496665512629 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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