Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on
each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals argue that there is a myriad of people becoming reliable on others while others say that the public make strenuous efforts to be independent. From my perspective, I totally agree with the latter idea.
On the one hand, I admit that asking for help from others is truly inevitable in the today’s word. Without the support from counterparts, it is said that some people would find it hard to fulfill all duties. A good example of this is that employees working in workplaces are immensely reliable on each others on a regular basis. When a man has to deal with numerous tasks that he hardly finishes in a particular period of given deadline, support from his companions will be one of the advantageous choices that he could make.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that being independent is becoming increasingly a ubiquitous trend. Some people believe that the human race, especially the young generation, need to rely on themselves with a view to taking care for not only their personal lives but also protecting their families. As the society has always been tempting and demanding, it is essential for them to get out of the comfort zone which acts as a deterrent to their maturity. Should they are barely taught about becoming an independent individual, they will struggle to survive in this planet, particularly in the competitive labor market. Therefore, relying on parents or relatives is an abject habit that the public should not develop.
In conclusion, although the demand for help is unavoidable in the 21st century, I am an advocate to the idea that we should accomplish most of the work on ourselves first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sh most of the work on ourselves first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90035587189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80170412042 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5872576639 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159523817861 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567296260188 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710725847895 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977795990365 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669977506 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.