Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Modern world can be defined as the competitive, hectic, stressful, availability of things with ease and so on, this makes people to be reliant on others in accomplishing any task. However, people have become quite independent as compare to an earlier time in many ways. Therefore, I am going to delve into both views and give my opinion.
To begin with, it is a pipe dream for someone to do any work alone on account of competition, which has made human to be dependent on each other due to manifold reasons. Firstly, no one is conversant in any field or realm, therefore people like to take help of others for getting their work done easily because nowadays everyone yearns for perfection, and this can be possible with an effective collaboration of people. Secondly, people are now under huge work pressure thus they like to distribute their work with others so that work could be done in a short span and effectively. Furthermore, this phenomenon proves to be an efficient for the small startups as well as for the giants. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that people are dependent on each other as a result this brings coordination as well as harmony in the atmosphere of the company.
However, the view that people have become more independent is also true due to several reasons. Firstly, technology has made people to do their work effectively as well as perform multiple tasks by sitting at one place without taking the assistance of anyone, which is again a positive development. Secondly, earlier people have problems in getting answers of their doubts owing to which they used to remain dependent on others, whether they are students or anyone, but now one can easily sort out his/her queries with the advent of various innovations. For instance, many students are doing their studies at home along with work, which made them utterly independent.
In conclusion, I reckon people can never be completely independent, because everyone needs assistance to get success in life in some form or the other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s by sitting at one place without taking assistance of anyone, which is again a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27058823529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70933079518 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567647058824 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5583206989 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.846153846 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0769230769 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233203120578 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919414785794 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437884037567 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139524954262 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297097160118 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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