Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Although money is considered by many people to be one of the most important contributing factors towards happiness, I personally believe that there are other expectations that should be fulfilled to feel happy and satisfied. However, poverty is the roof of many problems that make people both sad and desperate.
Nowadays with becoming the world to the global village the knock-on effects of money on human beings are more than past.
First and foremost factor is having lovely supportive family which could make happier life for people. For example usually people who have family tried to made them satisfied and if they success, they will approach to happiness. Secondly, another factor could be having job satisfaction. people are spending most of their time at work, and if they do not have job satisfaction, it will breed resentment. Thirdly, the little dreams is effective factor for happiness which needs no much money. For instant having a simple and calm life is easy to get. Fourthly, having more than enough money create more problems, that means the more money people have , the more responsibilities and trouble they have faced to.
In conclusion, there are numerous factors which lead to be happy, but in my opinion, having somewhat money that meets people’s needs is sufficient for approaching happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21296296296 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68033265521 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8450070196 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.363636364 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301966455815 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119109545487 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102258140936 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19538262886 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923141668786 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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