some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Money brings happiness has become a matter of discussion. Some individuals believe that money is the most important element to have a happy life. Nonetheless, in my opinion, the idea of that money can buy happiness has been disproved by science at up to a point.
There are various reasons as to why people can not have happy lives with money. One clear reason comes from the fact that rich people have very hectic and busy lives. This means they have no time to enjoy their wealth with either by themselves or with their families. Consequentially, many of them may suffer loneliness or depression because they spend significant amount of their times in thinking how to maximize this money. So, they do not have any time to talk or have fun.
However, happiness can be delivered by fallowing certain steps. The first stems from the fact that people should learn how to share, care and give with others. For instance, people who are doing voluntary work such as teaching in a charity or providing information at hospital information desk, are having by for greater happy lives than those who are working for gaining extra money. Similarity, parents who give extra time for their families to chat or have fun, have more enjoyable lives compare with others.
In conclusion, the debate of the relationship between money and happiness will continue as some people would argue that it is crucial. Nevertheless, I would firmly stand that people can have wonderful, lovely and happy lives without having so much money by fallow some steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91570881226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5323612694 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8273331341 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280736108694 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11509047141 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767882629906 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194884637168 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066491926434 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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