Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Crime is increasing at an alarming rate in the society.Some argue that crimes are the outcome of people's bad nature while some say that it is the result of circumstances like poverty and other social outcomes. I would opine that the poverty and inequality might be the two reasons for the crimes.
On one hand,some psychologists believe that criminality is the cause of one's unhealthy mind. When an unhealthy person does any criminal thing, he/she does not think about the consequences of the doing. And for some matter, he also does not think why he is doing it? Others think that the nature of human is greediness. So, when a person is not able to fulfill his person need then he opt to do social harm to others.
On other hand, some believes that poverty and social inequality are the two main cause for the happening of crime. Poverty is thinking as the significant reason for the increasing rate of crime which compels the underprivileged people to do illegal actions.For example, when a person is not able to feed his family, he tries to do illegal things to offer his family with food and shelter and our laws are not so powerful which can deter people to sustain them from crimes. Inequality in the civil rights makes the person criminal.For instance, when a person is not able to get access to the basic rights like medical facilities, the resentment against the unfairness might be provoked and no one will be able to prevent them from misconduct.
In the conclusion, I would say that although people negative nature and their unhealthy mind lead to crimes but sometimes, poverty and inequality among the people are the main cause of the misconduct .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79076923077 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60629053055 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489230769231 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.1911785242 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424936786365 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184341831463 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180141671314 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323279451672 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.311964337316 0.056905535591 548% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.