Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Promoting peace have become a heated topic because although we are free from wars, in our life there are still dangers such as suicide bombing, robbery, and murder. And nowadays, to improve the situation, an increasing number of people begin to concern about crimes. However, people may have disagreement on what accounts for crimes.
The reasons for people to support crimes are results of social problems vary. Some of them consider that poverty, the primary social problem in developing countries, leads people to commit crimes. In these impoverished regions, people hardly get employed and earn a living, because few jobs are available. As a result, these people have to rob others of money and food to survive. In addition, others may hold the idea that the unfairness of society also results in breaking the law. It might once be seen in newspapers that some of the privileged or the well-off bribe the judge and avoid conviction after they commit murder or rape. Feeling unfair to the judgment, therefore, the victims or their families assault and even kill the wrongdoer. In such cases, it is difficult to consider that people commit crimes because of their evil nature.
In contrast, proponents of born criminals think that people with certain character are potential culprits even if they do not suffer from financial problems. For example, some egoistic people have little capacity for empathy, so if others do not obey them or they cannot gain what they desire, they will use violence. Some lazy people do not want to earn a living with efforts, so they are prone to steal or defraud. Besides, the influence of gene is another consideration for these advocates. They cite that the structure of brains will affect our behaviors and some criminal behaviors are blamed on brain abnormalities. For instance, people whose prefrontal cortex do not function normally may find it difficult to control impulsive emotions, thus carrying a high risk of aggressive behavior.
In my opinion, social problems may play a more essential role in crimes because they are the inducement for people to show their evil nature. If everyone has good living condition and can be treated fairly, even the so-called born criminals will choose to enjoy a peaceful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05898123324 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5636532092 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565683646113 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2806254766 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3157894737 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263103325837 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829353199278 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620344618724 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147385557662 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670757349612 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.