Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
At this present day and age, wealth becomes a symbol of power and greater opportunity. There are people who believe that the most essential part of being wealthy is the chance to do charitable acts. This author completely agrees that opportunity for the rich people to lend a hand to other people who are in need is of utmost importance.
To begin with, there are a lot of advantages of being rich and helping others is one of them. This is because people who have a lot of money can give magnanimous donations to the charity programs that could help the needy. For instance, in the Philippines, The cancer Warrior foundation that helps the young children with cancer has been supported by some of the most affluent people of the country. This shows that rich people are not only for profits and gains but also individuals with the kind heart to help without financial return. Thus, wealth is not only about being powerful, more importantly their opportunity to change lives of the people they are able to help.
In addition, the wealthy are stereotyped as arrogant and fame whore because of their luxurious lives. By giving help and building charitable foundations, they will be able to prove to others that they are also a morally good people. High paying Filipino celebrities like Vice Ganda and Angel Locsin are well known for giving scholarships to those Filipino youth from poor families who want to pursue their studies. Their actions become an inspiration to others that above success and fame, sharing and helping is more important.
To recapitulate, being rich is indeed a privilege of having a luxurious comfortable life, power in the society and fame.But, it is the opportunity to help the needy that rise above all the benefits wealth could bring. If all the wealthy people in the world will be kind hearted to stretch a helping hand to the poor, the world will definitely be a happy place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ble life, power in the society and fame.But, it is the opportunity to help the need...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'benefits'' or 'benefit's'?
Suggestion: benefits'; benefit's
... help the needy that rise above all the benefits wealth could bring. If all the wealthy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79518072289 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54283951635 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1623058843 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321672073403 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107002240443 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656504763961 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183421168469 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060881087947 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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