Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the history and art of their country rather than the works of art of other the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In this modern era, museums and art galleries are the best places to preserve the fine arts and also helps to connect with history. some persons argued that museum and artwork galleries should more focus on own nation’s artworks apart from the international sculptures and artistic works. In my opinion, it can be beneficial to some extent this is far from the being best way but having international fine arts and museums are much more superior to this idea.
Having regional museums and art galleries are the first place to gain information about historical events and heritage of a particular nation. In addition, by showcasing or displaying the artworks and sculptures that excites to people dig deeper into the past events of their nation. Moreover, Owning such museums and fine works places that promote the tradition and values of the nation, local people should be proud of. For example, India has many art galleries and museums such as: national art gallery, Indian museums and many more which represent India’s history and fine collectible, they are much more famous in India as well as in other nations.
Representing the International artworks and sculptures it does not mean to hurt the feeling of other nation. In modern days, many countries have different museums such as wax museum, archaeological museum, war memorials, international art galleries, and the list goes on. By adding the international fine artworks and history makes museums more creative and functional and also helps to increase the bond between two nations. Moreover, international museums are also leading visitors to visit them and increase tourism, as a result, it helps to nation’s economy. For example, Paris contains 130 international museums within the city, thousands of visitors visit every year and increases 45% of the economy of France by tourism.
In conclusion, representing the national museums reflects the history, tradition but displaying international collectibles and fine works helps to make museums more productive, innovative and increase the financial state by the tourism sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3746223565 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89235126194 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.1991283222 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.846153846 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295552387147 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115636505184 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681398212115 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187748549454 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900863058166 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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