Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purposes of museum is to educate. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purposes of museum is to educate. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Museums are an inevitable part of every nation because it brings immense benefits. Some people think that museum is better place for enjoyment. However, others believe that the important factor of this place is providing education. This essay will discuss both points of views.

On the one hand, a number of museums are entertaining, across the globe, the public while conducting shows, drama, tableau and so on. This is because, people often bored when seeing only objects and antiques, so the authority always organize variety of activities in order to entertain the visitors. For example, the imperial war museum at Manchester in the UK, where they displays many types of programmes for the spectators especially for children. Thus, the viewers can understand the culture, tradition and social history of that particular area.

Others, on the other than, opine that one of the main reason for museum is that to promote education both locals and foreign visitor,. In fact, when someone visits such place, they can understand the sources of traditional paintings , art, objects and so on. Also, it results great advantage for both secondary school and archaeological pupils, doing some study and research. For example, In India, numerous educational institutions are often conduct study tours to Mysore palace museum since a few decades in order to do some exploitation as well as study purposes.

To sum up, museums are always upholding it’s real essence in every country. Although it provides a number of entertaining programmes, I firmly think that it is one of the greatest place for learning relevant places for information than other resources.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, in fact, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31698113208 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71680469621 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3154456289 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240590195966 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861296156334 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655031038341 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158941023772 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674607337907 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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