Criminal activity, these days, is a common phenomenon across the globe, but after the introduction of latest technology the number of crimes have declined significantly in the society. I firmly agree with this due to some relevant reason which I will discuss in this essay.
To begin with, social media plays a prime role to drop the crime rate in the community. This is because, today, almost everyone is used range of electronic gadgets like mobile phones and tablets in order to comfort their life which have also a greater option to send and share bulk of photos and videos instantly. To cite an example, if someone is detected any malpractice or illicit activity like street war or murder in their society, they can capture it and able to send to the police authority. Consequently, the cops can find the exact offender who involved in that practice can easily find out and sentence with evidence. Thus, the vast majority of people will not engage those activity due to fear of public.
Another justification is that CCTV camara can also be reduced the enormous criminal activity in both rural and urban areas. Today, many areas across the nation is protected with hidden camara due to rising illegal activity, whereas in the past it could not possible. For instance, in my home town in India where I can see CCTV camara everywhere even some residence in order to tackle unwanted doing. Consequently, the authority can detect and observe any issues take place in that particular area and reduce problematic situations too. Therefore, the advantage of new technology will not only catch the criminals but it also can pick exact person who pursuit within right time.
In conclusion, though criminal task can be seen everywhere both developed and developing countries, after launching of tecnological advancement it made much easier to protect the society from minor and major crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, even so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01904761905 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61369149288 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1770242033 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.615384615 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164017168401 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523983620942 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287966831857 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916107508635 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033099214068 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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