Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others thought that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While the museum is believed to be a spot for enjoying by the percentage of society, others hold the view that the museum is the place for learning and informing people about previous years in terms of historical, geography, art. In my opinion museum‘s environment should be organized based on both views,entertaining and informative. This essay will examine both side of debate before arriving at conclusion.
It is said that the museum should be delightful for visitors. First and foremost, whereas the museum is a place which have not been visited obligatory, it should be attractive and pleasurable enough to have own permanent visitors. Moreover, despite the informative and instructive nature of museum, it should be amazing enough to instill the historical and sought subjects to every visitors who have dedicated a considerable time for coming to museum.
In another hand, some people are argued that it is important to be the museum the educational place. Many stuffs are discovered preceding ages or even prehistorical era which are gathered in museum to show the evolution of human civilization or process of transformation and sweeping changes in animal and herbal species. Also, the evidence of extinct breeds such as dinosaurs are provisioned. Therefore, it is undeniable the aspect of instructive is inseparable. If the museum lost this major feature, it would be like covered entertainment park.
At conclude, given the above consideration, not only is museum an informative place, but also it is need to be entertaining enough to satisfy own visitors. This two main concepts near each other have organized the need of the museum existence.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27067669173 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13246338683 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1472178314 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370219644821 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129247540833 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887459353759 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223310274847 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687805814934 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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