Some people think that national sports team and individual man and women who represent their country should be financially supported by government.However,others argue that they should be funded by non-government sources (e.g. Business,scholarships)Discus

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...g with women who demonstrate their power for merit of own countries.Whilst some p...
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...their power for merit of own countries.Whilst some people think that non-governmental...
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...sources should financially support them.Personally,I deem that the former viewpoint which ...
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...ould financially support them.Personally,I deem that the former viewpoint which go...
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...uld fund the sportsmen. To begin with,several reasons are available why athletes shou...
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...not be funded by non-government sources.First of all,it might cause that different pr...
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...d by non-government sources.First of all,it might cause that different protests by ...
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...men or others who work like this sphere.Because,it is not a secret that to train of spo...
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...men or others who work like this sphere.Because,it is not a secret that to train of spo...
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...others who work like this sphere.Because,it is not a secret that to train of sports...
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... sportsmen does not demand little money.In this case if businessman repeatedly pay...
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...epeatedly pays money to support athletes,eventually,it may irritate them and they might rem...
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...nd they might remonstrate to government.As a result,it influence on reputation of ...
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...ht remonstrate to government.As a result,it influence on reputation of country.Seco...
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...emonstrate to government.As a result,it influence on reputation of country.Secondly,busin...
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...t,it influence on reputation of country.Secondly,businessmen have own troubles such as s...
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...luence on reputation of country.Secondly,businessmen have own troubles such as sustaining a ...
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...en have own troubles such as sustaining a their family.Thus, they may not be able to su...
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...ubles such as sustaining a their family.Thus, they may not be able to support athlet...
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...they may not be able to support athlets.Besides that,nobody prefer to give money for un...
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... be able to support athlets.Besides that,nobody prefer to give money for unknown people...
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... to support athlets.Besides that,nobody prefer to give money for unknown people. Ho...
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...ive money for unknown people. However,the people who deal with a sport should be ...
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...h a sport should be funded by government,also,they must be provided with good opportu...
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...ided with good opportunities many-sided.Since,if an opportunity is well,the result of...
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...with good opportunities many-sided.Since,if an opportunity is well,the result of at...
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...ny-sided.Since,if an opportunity is well,the result of athletes will be admirably in...
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...ments such as 'Olympic Games'.And this effects on merit of country and it...
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... will become popular among other states.If sportsmen win in any competition of the...
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... will become popular among other states.If sportsmen win in any competition of the...
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...rded with a lot of money besides medals.Consequently,they can refund expenses which made by ...
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...lot of money besides medals.Consequently,they can refund expenses which made by gover...
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...efund expenses which made by government.Although some reasons are available that are rel...
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...are related to this funding by countries,abovementioned statements are more significant. In ...
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...s are more significant. In conclusion,governments should notice to fund own athletes,if t...
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...ments should notice to fund own athletes,if they want to be famous in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01568627451 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.49040328317 2.80592935109 160% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.319886245 49.4020404114 466% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.5 106.682146367 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.75 20.7667163134 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 7.06120827912 538% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362430612398 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231787516221 0.084324248473 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776889694616 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231787516221 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776889694616 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 13.0946893788 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.39 50.2224549098 -19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.52 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.47 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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